Kiriban -- FerrisWheelShipping FerrisWheelShipping One-Shot for WhitePearlVoice There he stood, in front of the ferris wheel, awaiting her. He wasn't facing her. White looked at him, and didn't walk any closer. What she really was planning to do was to challenge Elesa, Nimbasa City's Gym Leader.But then she saw him... His hair cached the wind, and gently blew in her direction. Her Snivy made no sound for once, which was unusual to him. He always would make cute, funny or exited squeals. But this one time, it was silently sitting on her shoulder.She stepped back, and accidentally stepped on a twig. It broke with a loud snap. He almost turned around immediately, and noticed White."I've been waiting for you..." He quietly said. He walked towards her. In no time he was close to her, maybe a little too close... White felt her cheeks getting rosy as he grabbed her hand."I guess you're looking for Team Plasma...?" N asked with the same quiet tone in his voice. For some reason, it sounded calming, but also li
Mary Sue Guide - Part 1The BasicsBefore you start reading this, two things to keep in mind:Do not simply assume your OC is or isn't a Mary Sue before you start reading. Keep an open mind.This guide is NOT a rulebook. No matter how Sue I think something is, that doesn't mean you absolutely should not do it under any circumstance. Also, some things are more minor than others. Just because your character has some Sue traits doesn't make her a Sue. A little flare doesn't hurt.Enjoy ^^This is by no means meant to be offensive or aimed at any specific author or character. It is also not 100% accurate. There are always circumstances outside a Mary Sue Guide. The purpose of this is not to be a statement of fact but merely something to help.Definition of a Mary Sue: A clichéd being that is often too perfect and unrealistic. Because of this, they may cause other characters to go out of character.Possible Traits of a Mary Sue and How to Fix Them:1.
PMD-Explorers Character Meme1) Hello! What's your (user)name, and how long have you been writing?2) Wow... That's, uh, impressive... *ahem* Let's move on... Care to describe your team?3) So cool! Wait a sec, what guild are they in? How long have they been there?4) I see... So what do they think of the leaders?5) Speaking of, I know Devonshire and Gunpowder play chess/checkers a lot. What does your team do for fun? Write a little passage with your characters unwinding with their hobbies. Go in-depth!6) Wow. But I wonder... Do they do anything together? Give me the details, with an example.*If you're a loner, what do you think of the rest of the village? Short story please!7) Hah. Sounds like my friends. Hey look! There, at Spinda's Cafe! A surprise party, just for you guys! We're celebrating your guild work, whether it's a "Congrats, you're in" party or a "Nice job on that Mission" party. How does it go?8) What'd you guys order? It's on the house! Oh, come on. Just tell us what your favorite foods are...9